The Floating City [OOC] [TWO]
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Re: The Floating City [OOC] [TWO]
I'll leave it up to Agamemnon whether he has time to carve out a response, but the story-line is not halting for more than a few days during this stint. I am happy for the Ferran/Gasparo conversation to continue out of sequence though.
Even if it doesn't, I honestly think it works just fine as a rhetorical cliffhanger. It shows the struggle that Ferran is having. Would Gasparo's response really be able to resolve that struggle so easily?
Even if it doesn't, I honestly think it works just fine as a rhetorical cliffhanger. It shows the struggle that Ferran is having. Would Gasparo's response really be able to resolve that struggle so easily?
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Re: The Floating City [OOC] [TWO]
In truth no.
But it could decidedly shape the way Ferran would act (or react) towards Gasparo in the coming scenes.
Still you are right. Even as a rhetorical cliffhanger it has its purposes.
But it could decidedly shape the way Ferran would act (or react) towards Gasparo in the coming scenes.
Still you are right. Even as a rhetorical cliffhanger it has its purposes.
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Is anyone going to intervene with Marco kicking Lucio's ass?
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Ferran is. Posting.
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Did a slight edit of your post Benedict, Lucio isn't trying to get up.
Korbel are you okay with what Benedict wrote? Is Marco going to stop, or are we picking up dice?
Korbel are you okay with what Benedict wrote? Is Marco going to stop, or are we picking up dice?
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Sorry guys. It's 2am. I need to sleep.
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Re: The Floating City [OOC] [TWO]
See you tomorrow, then, I guess.
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Good night mate.
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Re: The Floating City [OOC] [TWO]
Sorry I haven't been more interactive the last couple days. We've been hella busy with layout and the like. I'm simultaneously writing, editing, doing layout, and working with Barbarossa on making sure the sheets and coding stuff is coming along.Benedict wrote:Don't want to be a dick and all.
I know time is limited. So I ask directly. Do you want Agamemnon to resolve this scene between Gasparo and Ferran? I think it will affect their interaction for the coming Scene(s). If you don't want to, I should just erase that last post instead of leaving it to a nonsensical cliffhanger.
Also, that day-job thing that keeps electricity happening. The electricity is nice to have, for this kind of work.
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No worries!
Just gave a heads up in case you missed it. I understand that the workload is tremendous.
Just gave a heads up in case you missed it. I understand that the workload is tremendous.
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Is anyone going to intervene with Giacomo?
He has his rapier at the ready and looks like he means to use it.
He has his rapier at the ready and looks like he means to use it.
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Well, its only me online at the moment. And wounded. Dunno for the rest, but I won't stand against him. Unless you want me to make a new character.
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I know Ferran doesn't care.
We have to wait for Korbel, at the very least. I don't think Giorgio or the foreigners really care one way or the other.
We have to wait for Korbel, at the very least. I don't think Giorgio or the foreigners really care one way or the other.
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Can I edit my last post? I want to say something else to Lucio.
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sure
EDIT: Actually, Gasparo might intervene. Being honorable and all.
EDIT: Actually, Gasparo might intervene. Being honorable and all.
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